If you could hear my pillow talk
The secrets you would know
If in my shoes you could walk
You would feel the pain I show
If you could taste the tears I cry
When I wanted you instead
You would know the reasons why
Lonely nights in empty bed
If you could wake alone with me
To how my days do start
Only then could you see
It's with a broken heart
If you could enter in my dream
You would know I hurt so much
As night lets out a silent scream
I know were losing touch
It's too late I have to walk
Time has took it's toll
Listen to my pillow talk
It's where I left my soul
A contest entry
- Write Whatever You Want by ShadedRose.
370 points, ended August 18, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - silent screams we make by moonburndcheese.
300 points, ended February 4, 2008, 34 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a well earned gold. This poem is so true and I can especially relate to it right now because I'm holding a lot in and feel misunderstood. And your poem had a nice flow and it really touched me.
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good poem, it had good flow and the end line was wonderfully placed.
congrats on the gold.
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CONGRATS
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as always...another beautiful write. you have such pure, raw emotion in your writing. i love it!
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i really like this... strong emotion is shown thank you for entering
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Your style is a lot like mine. I liked it a lot. Thanks for entering!
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Aww this is so sad and filled with so my pain.
It is beautifully written though :/
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TEARS OF SADNES
This is so heart breaking and filled with such deep emotion,I sure hope it is just a poem
If only pillows could talk...Feel the pain;empty bed;broken heart;losing touch;my pillow is where I left my soul
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So very sad....pillows know our most deepest secret....our joy and our pain...
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