The red nile that you seek,
Is far away far the place that you meet,
The blood curling scream,
The nightmarish dream,
This you see behind closed eyes,
Forgiving your numbness inside.
Shattered glass around you head,
Crying, As blood flows from your bed,
I will not stop and ponder,
As the murders kill and wonder,
This will be my last dead wishes,
Take me only with sucide kisses.
Cold December rain pours on the souls of the discord,
It pierces their flesh for the leftover sword,
And the devil rides off on a black bird.
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nicly writin thanx for entering my contest
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The blood curling scream, The nightmarish dream, very chilling and deep write full of cold pain as the last line sums it up. good penning good luck and thanks for entering blessings ~Cheryl~
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