Can a heart be truly broken
Or is it just the pain
From words you left unspoken
That always left me drained
From always trying to make you see
And getting nothing back
Now my heart is broken
Yours I could not crack
As the tears run down my face
It's like bits of you are leaving
They run upon my lips to taste
The love I wont be feeling
I know i'll get over you
But i'll never be the same
For it's not what I want to do
But to you it's just a game
A game I had no chance to win
Cause I played it with my heart
If you would have played with yours
We wouldn't be apart
Author notes
Head games or head cases
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this is truly one of my fave poems in this contest with ones I've read so far. I can relate to what you're saying. And I can understand the pain of loving someone who is only in it for a bit of excitement and yet they really have no intention of hurting you..they just want to keep things as less complicated for both of you.
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this a beautiful write well done but so sad...... this a great job good luck in the comp
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Wow..this poem is wonderful, and beautiful. The emotion in it is great, and the flow is outstanding!
[great.job&thanks.for.entering!]
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Great job. This poem is beautifully written. I love the last stanza. You have really good rhthm and rhyme. And the flow of the poem is natural. Excellent job
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Such powerful words that can impact a heart gone lame....or a heart that can't be there...beautiful and truthful emotion...smiles, Terry
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