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Fledgling cough

I am but a fledgling cough
The razor like liquid
Poisoning your veins
I am but the stepladder
To your noose
The only regret
You risk speaking of

I am but cotton candy
Between your fingers
And your pills
I am but the hands of love
Around your neck
Telling you I love you

I am you.

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  • RazorbladeKissCasel
    March 7, 2007
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    like it...

    I like it you should comeby and check out my poems sometime if you want...nice job...