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Skipping Spellcheck

Walking the line of insanity and writers inspiration
I flit through the words on page with burning radiation
To get the thoughts out and send them to her

Breaking lead tip after lead tip
I can't help it if excitement gets the best of me
One day, you'll understand what's gotten into me

I can just imagine the tears in her eyes
Heartbreaking tears with a tear-jerking smile
Breathing with every word that's on that page

She takes it all in with great contemplation
All of this is for her, when love is what can be done
Love is what I write.

Unless lightining strikes twice and it all goes downhill
Neurosis sets in and abyssmal speaks it's speckled tounge.
Forgetting the good and raising the bad

What spills on the page seeps from my veins
I bleed ink and ink fills the void between my ears
I write through the pain to fight another day

Until time stands still again and I can count the air
Particular particles pulsating pensively in perfect formation
And I can see your name, time and time again

I write of passion and disdain
I write of strength and weakness
I write who you are and I wish I could be

Love is what I write, all of it is for love
And if the words don't fit...
You can fill in the  .

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  • PerfectImperfection
    March 18, 2007

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    Very nicely penned! Thank you so much for entering! Good luck to you!

  • in-the-twilight
    March 5, 2007

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    Dang... this is absolutely beyond amazing! I loved the metaphor and the feeling that ran through such a strongly written poem! Such great flow... amazing! I don't know what else to say except bravo! Rock on! xoxo Meg