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The Love of a Woman for a Woman




When we met we were mere strangers with a single tale to tell-
the story of our heart aches and rejection from modern society.


When I looked into your eyes
I was sweetly hynotized

And you knew not the loved we were to share
and I knew not the words to wear

nor speak nor write upon the blank parchment that you gave me
you asked me to write a poem, not about a lonely girl but, "the pain you see."

Then out of nowhere our hearts connected when our hands did join
and you granted me the presence of your smile, sweet and temtping smirks.

I remember our first date, when we hid our love like no other
and it phased me not one bit, for in our hearts we knew we couldn't love another

and the bright day truned to dusk
and the night sky fell upon us.

With lips of an angel, or more ancient and sweeter nymph
I stood there at the door with ye and recieved entrancing kiss.

I knew I'd love you forever that day we shared our pain
I know i'll love your forever since that first kiss the June rain.

I think though the thing that I like about you the most
is that your heart is immense and you never stop caring

No matter happens, or the wrongs I do
Your love for me is unfaultering, faithful and true.

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CB

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  • Ignis Corpus
    June 6, 2007

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    With lips of an angel, or more ancient and sweeter nymph
    I stood there at the door with ye and recieved entrancing kiss.
    I knew I'd love you forever that day we shared our pain
    I know i'll love your forever since that first kiss the June rainI think though the thing that I like about you the most
    is that your heart is immense and you never stop caring
    This is what got me, i loved it this is what i was looking for good luck in the contest


  • Erica Weeks
    March 17, 2007

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    crystal...is there something that you aren't telling me?? regardless, i love you and i love your poetry...this is no exception..it was absolutly beautiful!!!


  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    March 5, 2007
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    Very very beautiful, u must love her, this poem is brilliant, stunning, and fresh. Great Job!!!!