It smells like Halloween,
Sans the empty rolling mist,
And the crinkled brown dusty leaves.
The weather feels much the same,
Cold and the wind is merciless.
There's no excitement there, though.
It feels like another day,
But it smells like Halloween.
Author notes
I just smelled the smell of what I think is the smell of Halloween. And that has inspired this.
A contest entry
- Nothing is ever really random, is it??? by bw43.
300 points, ended March 12, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Boredom by Followthebutterfly.
300 points, ended July 29, 2007, 11 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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lol. the smell of Halloween? I dont think I ever had a smell in mind for halloween... except for maybe candy and chocolate with face paint aroma...
This was interesting. I liked it.
i guess the autumn smell is Halloween for you?
Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest "D
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lol, it has a smell to me, for some reason, but it's not just the autumn sent, there's more to it.
Thank you.
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Man, this is so close to being awesome for me but what is sans? You have some really outside-the-box ideas that I can appreciate. I think you only need to re-define the over used puncuation gap though or leave it out all together since you break your lines well anyway. I love the smell of a good helloween metal-fest massacre.
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By "sans" I mean "except."
Thank you for the suggestions and comment!
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cool
cool write. very creative. halloween is like my favoite holiday. i dress up as something redickuluss(speeling sucks)lol. like a pair of panties and a cape. or i'd be quail man. lol. again great write.
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Thank you!
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