She is laying on the beach
I can't reach out to her
She was my best friend
She is dying now
Laying there unsafe and able to be harmed
I am scared for her
She is my best friend
Days on the ocean
Meeting each other and talking
She is dying now
I wish she was okay
I wish she wouldn't hurt
But she is my best friend
And she is dying now
Sad
And
Alone
Author notes
I used picture number 4 for this contest
A contest entry
- Winner Take All, Fantasy, Pic Inspired Contest. by Lord Merlynn.
1175 points, ended March 10, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmm... Maybe I need to see the image to completely understand it... Being a huge language freak, you could have used a little variation, but if that's not your style then that's cool. I just like a little variation. Powerful imagery, though. Can you tell me your thoughts about the picture? Maybe that'll help me a bit.
Lea -
very emotional and well written. I love how it ended. Good Luck in my contest.
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