Beauty, the epitome of every teenage fantasy,
To lose that extra pound; that extra inch.
To be walking billboards for every other mindless gnome that society has produced.
Advertisement slogan reads as this: “Me is in. I am the shit;
The crème-de-la-crème. If you’re smart, you’ll follow me.
I am the bitch with big tits that every guy dreams about,
I know exactly which lip-gloss to use, to give that sexy pout,
that makes your boyfriend putty in my hands.
I am the sexy mami that can run in high heels,
but will never feel,
anything but sorry for you.
I have silicone boobs; liposuction
Many facelifts and botox injections,
to date.
10 inch heels, Prada bags,
Look at you, you’re a fag
for wearing last season’s “couture.”
I am the criticizing, backstabbing bitch that will tell you when your shit stinks,
society worships me; you do too.
I can see it in your eyes,
each time you sigh,
as I proudly parade by,
you.
Face it, you’re jealous,
you know that you can never beat me
I am indestructible, for there is not a part of me real
it has been removed for cold, hard, shiny plastic,
That can show you up anytime.
Come on! I dare you to try.
My forces are impenetrable,
Everyone wants to be me: no one wants to be you.
Author notes
MistakenlyPerfect
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ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!
This is exactly what I'm looking for. Wonderful job. I felt the meaning. I felt it through my body. Very nice. Great joB!!! and I love the title. Thanks for entering. and good luck on your other contests. Much love.
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Haha! How true.
Plastic people roam America, and it pretty much makes me mad.
This showed it quite well.
I also liked the title!
Hooked me in very easily!
-System of Cyanide
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Wow. This is powerful. Very vivid descriptions. Perhaps more metaphor could have been used to add even more power.
You opened speech marks in the fifth line. Is there meant to be closing speech marks somewhere?
Thank you for entering this poem in my contest.
DancingRed.
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oooo aaaa. wonderful. i could definetly not have written it better myself
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Great write!! I like this a lot.
Thanks for entering!!
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LMAO...I think you summed the Bimbo Leaders of America so well!!! This had me laughing through it all, but those bimbos do offer entertainment when boredom strikes...laughing at their flakiness and dis-illusioned world. Yeah, it's great. Well done! Well done!
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