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i miss i miss i miss

i miss the summer. i miss being happy. i miss being normal, i miss being me. even though i've never been those things i miss them over&&over&&over until i can fake the memories, pretend they were there all along and move along with just the song singing in my head.

you are soso perfect. perperperfect. so much more perfect than i am, than i ever was, than i'll ever be. perfect. if i say it enough, it doesn't sound like a word. so maybe then the pain will go away, and i can smile and forget all the 'i miss i miss i miss'

can you be anymore than a twilight? could you live outside that perfect moment before the day begins, before work, before other people, before e.very.thing? nonono. you're too perfect, tootoo perfect for me, for them, for us.

it's not.the.same

it is
      not  the  same

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there's soso much i want to put down. but it's too hard, because.. i don't even know, as soon as i try to think of it, it's gone and that's it.

so excuse this. it's meaningless shit. i apologise.

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  • bloody-black heart
    June 9, 2007

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    wow!

    great write i love the title becuase i miss alot of things i can't get back.lol i'll get over it great poem and good luck in everything!
    -amy


  • noir eyes
    March 7, 2007

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    i miss it, too, sweetie
    im here if you need to talk.
    & this is not meaningless shit. it was amazing & filled with a ton of emotion. you rock babycakes, & i love you.
    im here for you, okay sweetie pie?


  • makeout kid
    March 5, 2007

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    wow.
    this is coincidentally me.
    i feel like i'm reading my exact thoughts.
    weird.

    i know how you feel honey.
    && whenever you need someone to listen or a shoulder to lean your pretty little head upon...i am here.
    okay?

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