The forest enhanced by the shadows of grass paire, dawn capturing of sunlight over-view
A contest entry
- ~~~ONE LINER~~~ #1 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended March 7, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
it's so pretty...
-
LOvely wording!! Grass paire is a good imagery!!! Greeennnsss my fav colour and U have given life to da colour!!
Thanks so much for entering and good luck!!
preets
-
-
thank you
Green as always been my color,,It sorrounds me..and I love it....thank you for giving me this challenge....I wanted the reader to feel warmth in this and the color green,,,
it will always be my color..
-
-
very soothing!!! The words flow in a chain of comfort!!! There is a lot of warmth in it!!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!!
preets
Ps-there is no neeed to change anything!!! its good as it is!


