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Steely Blue

Smoky dreams, steal sunshine from horizon, envelope breath in shady dark, conscience smeared
Steely blue

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one line description of colour

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  • workingharleylady
    March 17, 2007
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    nice

    I envision a smokey backround on misty filled water top. Excellent choice of words throughout poem.


  • penman gold member
    March 13, 2007
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    Wonderful

    This was a really great single line. Good luck in the contest.

  • phoenixonfire
    March 6, 2007

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    Blue...its one of my fav colours too...so deep and so beautifully penned!! I like the way u have compared the colours to the beauty of the smoky dreams...great imagery and nicely put!!!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!!
    preets


  • Myjoy gold member
    March 5, 2007
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    Great write. Well done. Well said.