With every drop of the whip
They show their love
The only love that they know
With every slap to the face
With every stab to the heart
They show they care
They show much I mean to them
With every hate filled word
They give me their blessings
For to them that is all I need
They tell me every day
Always having to remind me
Of my place in this world
Their world
Whip the love out of their toy
Slap the happiness out of their marionette
Stab the dreams of their weapon
To win their sick game
I must win their death
The world must take cover
For I bring with me a time
Of chaos and destruction
Life and Death
Two things that they will beg for
But I remember all too well
Of the love they showed me
I will not hurt nor kill
Any but them
A weapon with a dysfunction
A marionette with cut strings
A toy with a broken smile
Life is so overrated…but then again so is death
Author notes
I'v got nothing ta say...oh but this came to me in a dream...creepy. >_<
Please tell me what you think
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wow
I left a comment on this one a long ass time ago. Eveyrtime i read this poem it makes me shiver.I love this poem great job.
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Thanks!?!
Thank you very much for reading it again AND taking the time to reply to it again. I am glad that it can still get ta ya.
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WHOA!
wow, that came to ya in a dream? that's kinda scary but its an awesome poem.
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WOW!!!!
Very deep, I like it, all of it!, great imagery and nice flow! Great Job!
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Wow. This is disturbingly good. It makes you really rethink happiness.. =]
~WU
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Awesome
Your very good, the final line shows a great bit of wisdom, congratulations on your writing.
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i think this poem is amazign great write i look forward to ur others.
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Life is so overrated…but then again so is death
Life is so overrated…but then again so is death
So wise line--I like this piece alot & it's what I feel nowadays-lol..
GloriousGift
--Heba
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wow
this is good!!! alot of feelings in it!!! good job!! -
i think if i was dreaming like this i would stay awake for a few days.... fantastic stuff full of such intensity
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"The world must take cover
For I bring with me a time
Of chaos and destruction"
I love that ^.
This is a very good poem. Love the end and the last line. Must have been an interesting dream.
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