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Love comes

When I open my heart this is what I hear.
Loves laughter, joys jubilance; loud and clear.
My voice in good cheer, with peace and love,
above, the voice of a higher power; I feel no fear.

I feel loves words as they take hold within my heart.
A warm embrace I cherish and let kindle there.
They say "come into the fold", I have a place to start.
No more alone in cold truth nor in despair.

The birds sing, the trees sway, the earth breathes.

The skies, though sometimes dark, promise to clear.

The soothing sound of rain and busy rustle of leaves.
when I open my heart, this is what I hear.

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  • piccola silver member
    April 8, 2007
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    I like the rhyme and the theme as well. Lots of images too. thank you for the entry and good luck.


  • poetryality silver member
    March 7, 2007

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    Beautiful! I love all the wonderful nuances and the fact that this poem is filled with glee. There is a great feeling of "joy" in these words. They spin and twist and make the reader feel renewed. Excellent!

    Thank you so very much for the time spent to enter my challenge. I wish you all the best.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


    • Ogreatbaldone gold member
      March 7, 2007
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      Thanks Renee, I found this one tough to write halway through, it took a lot to get it finished, which is unusual for me, but I was happy with the end result...peace Terry


  • queenie
    March 5, 2007

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    you are certainly a great one for this a piece that encompasses your heart and displays the wonders of you.it shows how very gentle you are and still lets your strenght as a man show clearly.