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Darkness

My eyes are draped in this darkest shade of night, and suddenly everything that hurts is gone.

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  • xeroabyss II
    August 27

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    If only even for a moment, it feels good to let the world just disappear, and drift in the unsentient thoughts of stark nothingness of thought.
    Especially when it is the middle ofthe blinding day, and the night and solitude are an eternity of hours away.

  • phoenixonfire
    March 7, 2007
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    Dark and sad yet so astounding!! I could really feel this write stirring me..there is a lot of depth and feel in this write which I really liked!!

    Fab work!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    preets