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Destruction

Why do you do this?
Torturing me in such ways
you just haunt yourself.
And that sort of destruction
can never be remedied.

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An attempt at a Tanka (Japanese form of poetry - syllable count 5/7/5/7/7). Poetry seminars have got my muse back into gear again. This is what I hope to use in a test tomorrow.

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