look through my eyes, past the turquoise iris, see what none other do; black
A contest entry
- ~~~ONE LINER~~~ #1 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended March 7, 2007, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great job...describes not only the color but more depth....amazing! I see why it won! Good job!
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thanks for the comment. winning that contest actually took me by surprize
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this definitely deserved first...a wonderful write that makes you think..i adore those..peace and harmony...desi
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An extremely powerful write!! There is so much imagery in it!! The eyes are so nicely potrayed that i really am taken with the worken!! Just amazing line!!
Thanks for sharing such ur amazing poetic skills wid me!!
Good luck!!
preets
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