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Veteran Colors:

Folded, white stars upon field of blue is how our country says good-bye to you.

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All that is left of my Dad don`t you see,
he did survive with my Mom to make me.

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  • phoenixonfire
    March 7, 2007

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    Very powerful!! Sacrifice is a tough think!! U have related blue to that in a very creative way!! Smart write!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

    preets


  • paullallady silver member
    March 5, 2007

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    what a beautiful line. It speaks of honor, and sacrifice, and sadness. It shows hope and everything our country was built on.
    great job with this.