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Blue


When I first looked into her deep blue eyes, Heaven was all I saw.


One Line Poem

Author notes

shades of blue
sooth
express emotion
elation
pain and sorrow..
the color of heaven
and a color to get lost in
when you look to the sky.

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  • phoenixonfire
    March 7, 2007
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    how romatically beautiful write expreesed in just one line!! all your emotions and feelings come ut so beautifully!! Love that poem in ur authors notes!!

    Profound write!!

    Thanks for entering and good lucK!

    preets
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  • Elrenia
    March 6, 2007

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    Very nicely penned. Why does deep blue make one think of heaven? No idea. However, this captures that sentiment.

    Well wishes in the contest.
    Thank you for sharing.

    rous


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 5, 2007

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    This is very emphatic, very detailed in its brevity. Liked this one line entry you have written for this contest. Will have to check the contest out, although this certainly seems to me to be in the running.