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Let there be light...

"Let there be light" said the Lord Lo' there was White...

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  • phoenixonfire
    March 7, 2007
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    little cliche if u ask me..as u r referring to the colour white...the one liner is good but does not bring out the beauty of white..but neverthless well tried!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 5, 2007

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    you know this is good, and if you think about it that was the color that did change the world, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Xxthe angry gothxX
    March 5, 2007

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    A great piece

    I thought that this was an awesome one liner. It reminds me of not only the gift of light and everything it brongs, but how He was the Light [and how he brought His son Jesus and die for all of us] and how the Light brings us hope and rejoice.