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Just Peachy






Softly enveloping, the fuzzy warmth encompasses the soul.









©2007
3-5-2007

Author notes

Written for the contest: ~~~ONE LINER~~~ #1
A COLOUR CAN CHANGE YOUR WORLD!!! by phoenixfromdust
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2342032

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  • phoenixonfire
    March 7, 2007
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    The poem seems to get more effect with the background u have put!! there is a very calm and soothing effect..like u said fuzzy kind of feeling when i read this!!

    This is mind touching work!!
    keep it up!!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!!

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