onyx and shattered dreams in the quiet understanding of jet black.
A contest entry
- ~~~ONE LINER~~~ #1 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended March 7, 2007, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is amazoing, origional, so much said in one line. congrats on your silver trophy
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One of the kind!! Black is my fav colour along with green
But the way u have potrayed black has stunned me into silence!! me n my frnd where reading this work and she was in love with your write!! and me 2!!
Awesome one liner!! U have done justice to black and onyx!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!!
preets
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Wow, I like this a looot. I love the use of black and mentioning of rocks. It makes the darkness seem so natural and resillient and stuff. Great line here!
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Very cool. I liked it. Those moments in darkness, when you understand it all. Great job.
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