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To put it bluntly

Why can’t I touch you?
Why can’t I reach you?
I try oh so hard to connect on even the basic levels
But alas to no prevail

Why is it I wake up every morning hopeful of even the shortest glance?
But all I get is self guided misdirection?
And yet, why does my heart fly on? Steady for the only one….

Why is it through this whole vendetta we’ve never once had a class together?
Is it just plain fate shoving it in my face?
Screaming like a banshee you will never be better,
Never stronger, never secure, never a whole 
Only weaker

I'm going insane over my guilty shame
Go on serve it up
Tease me,
Confuse me,
Control me
You’re the only one I would take a shot on

What does it matter anymore?
Your heaven
I’m hell
With my love somewhere stuck in limbo
Confused like the different worlds we live in
That’s all it's ever been
All it's ever going to be...
Two opposites that can never meet.

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  • dark ice phoenix
    March 8, 2007

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    k thanks everyone supose i will sometime... just have my bad days... and good days, as every one does... jst made it on one of the not so good days...(actually i wrote down the majority while i was waiting for a class in a free at college)maybe i will when it's a not such a cloudy day........ and mon this is going to sound REALLY emo but... your right, love is not everything... but i believe life is, and life should be loved... either way thank you everyone!


  • Black Panic
    March 7, 2007
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    Eh, now I'll put it blunty. If you want someone, and they want you, and you become a couple, it doesn't always turn out all happy and glorious.
    Love is not everything.
    -Mon
    P.S Kick arse poem, well done & keep smiling.


  • Aussie Dreamer
    March 7, 2007
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    argh...i disagree with gigglepot! your hearts bigger than your humor. seriously dook go for it you have nothing to lose...never think your lower than anyone cause your not..as you have told me mannier times. Take your own advice and go for it.


  • Crazychook
    March 6, 2007

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    Poor Dooku! Hey...have you got this exchange student yet? It's gonna be funny! I haven't seen you for ages Dooku! Well I have, but we haven't actually talked for ages! Love ya hun!

    Meelz


  • gigglepot
    March 5, 2007
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    i really like this,
    its very sad though i hope one day you get yours, cause i want you to feel as happy as i do when im with mine, you have a heart under your humor, i knew you always did. hope we can catch up some time hun.

    cobie x

  • stolenKisses83
    March 5, 2007
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    very powerful and "Tease me confuse me control me" i like that line!

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