Our lives are photographed in the reflection of orange juice that shimmers in gold.
Author notes
Meh...
A contest entry
- ~~~ONE LINER~~~ #1 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended March 7, 2007, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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U have done justice to this one liner...I knew someone wud take orange but this one blowed my mind off!! There is so much depth and beauty in the work!!! love the delicate movement of ur work!!!
LOVE IT!!!
THanks for entering and good luck!!!
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wow, this is pretty damn deep for only a one liner. good job.

