When I open my heart, this is what I hear...
footprints gently making a forever impression,
like the wind whispering through the trees...
a drum gently beating in rhythm to mine,
as our essences entwine...
tears falling softly
as you express your everlasting love...
your eyes sparkling
with the memories of warm summer nights passion
but most of all I hear...
the music of your soul enveloping me in it's wings,
to be nurtured with a chorus,
in unison...
Author notes
Art Work:
"Sound"
by Theresa Lucero
A contest entry
- Another 24 Hours # 2 by poetryality.
300 points, ended March 7, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oops - I left these on the shelf ...
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And yet another moving endeavour by your good self!
I must save ... I absolutely loved "a forever impression" and I forthwith announce my intent to use it myself sometime (places it gently among my notes) ... and hey! - it is not stealing if you're honest upfront!
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I love the imagery written here poet. There is a peaceful, warming sensation I am left with after reading these soothing words. Very touching! Beautiful!
Thank you ever so much for the time spent to enter my challenge with this lovely poem. I wish you all the very best.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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another beautiful poem by you, i love your description and imagery, it is so vivid. i love the part;
a drum gently beating in rhythm to mine,
as our essences entwine...
the entire poem is perfect
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oh, gave me such a wonderful wispy romantic feeling...tremendous imagery felt here...as well as passion...good job, good luck!
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wonderfull words you have used to to alow us to hear the sounds ... great write ..good luck in the contest xxx cheeky
xxx
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i like how you can hear eyes sparkling.that gives this piece great imagery and enhances the beauty of what you here in your heart.this is a great write.my best to you in the contest.
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That's beautiful. I can close my eyes and imagine the sounds you speak of when you open your heart to the possibilities. Well written and full of emotion. Love it!!
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