Hello Little Sister,
How are you today?
I'm writing this little letter,
hoping it will encompass what i want to say.
I love you little sister,
no matter what you say!
I wish we could be closer but i know it's just a phase.
I'm trying to look back to when i was your age.
Did i fend off every contact with constant turn of page?
I try many times to break through your shield.
But it's as if you can't or won't hear me from behind your forcefield.
I miss you little sister,
and how it used to be.
When there was i time, i am sure, that you wanted to be with me.
I know you'll grow up and out of this phase.
But please little sister,
call me from your daze.
That's all i will write.
That's all i will say.
One day little sister,
hopefully, one day.
A contest entry
- I Want To Feel Your Pain!!!!!! by tawk.
625 points, ended March 7, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This was hard for me to write, please tell me what you think.
Comments
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wow, this sounds like my situation except flipped, my older sis is the one that i'm calling to, though I'm sure before she got so distant, my own older sisters writes stuff like this (if she did write) about me. great job, though sometimes the rhymes seems a bit forced. I liked it I like the last stanza there. with love and giggles, the white rabbi
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Awwww what a sad and very deep write. I hope that your sister gets back to you soon. Great flow and content. Good luck in my contest
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So touching and deep, the pain and memories,
The hope and light here, brings you back to your early days, How we want to be close to our siblings, but yet for me and some other people is very hard...
This is like a song for me too
Just so beautiful
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