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Defining Moments

I wrote this last night in honor of my mom who died on March 7th, two years ago.  I miss her more every day!


Defining Moments

At sixty seconds old, I knew my mom had done  a very difficult thing,

squeezing all six pounds of me through her......, well you get the idea

(Hard to do or accomplish; demanding considerable effort or skill; arduous)

At two I was  terrible  - (Unpleasant; disagreeable)

At five I decided  mom was perfect - (Lacking nothing essential to the

whole; complete of its nature or kind.)

At ten, thought she grew money on trees - (agriculturist of sorts)

At twelve, the last year I would see her as perfect until I got married and

before accusing her and anyone over thirty of being against me

(malfunction of the teenage brain spitting out incorrect info)

At fourteen she  convinced me I wasn‘t going crazy but might still

put me away (PMS)

At sixteen I believed she forgot what is was like to be that age -

 (when girls should be locked up for the remaining years ending in t-e-e-n)

At twenty and newly married, conscious how much I missed

meals served to me at the table - (what a waitress does)

At thirty admitting finally mom was right about a few things -

 (In accordance with fact, reason, or truth; correct)

At forty realizing she was my friend and right about a lot more things-

(A person whom one knows, likes, and trusts)

At forty five having a better perspective of the years I thought she was

going crazy and would have to be put away - (menopause)

At forty seven she leaves this world- (the most difficult, terrible thing

I have ever gone through, heartbreaking.  I thought I would go crazy

and have to be put away when my perfect mom and friend was

suddenly gone (grief)

Nearly fifty and missing her so much, deciding I want to be more like her

having known and loved her and  loved by her in return.   I will not go crazy

 but spend my remaining years making her proud like I will always be of her-

(a defining moment)

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  • x Bright Eyes x
    March 12, 2007

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    hi i thought this was a nice read and would like to thank you for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck


  • candy-coated-razors
    March 10, 2007

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    wonderful

    you have a really great way with words... its so weird that when your young you think that life is so hard and that everything your parents say about the future isn't true because you aren't them but as you get older you find out that a lot of the things that they had said are becoming more and more true...Keep up the good work!


  • Gwenevere
    March 5, 2007

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    Beautiful

    So many wonderful memories in the realisation that your mum gave you a ( Normal ) childhood.so many are not so lucky.she was your best friend and you confident and you teacher and all that is good wrapped in a near perfect package.It is good that you are able to share these wonderful feelings.I hope it eases the sadness a little.You have given us a moment of brightness sharing these moments with you, Ros

  • hazydreams
    March 5, 2007

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    Great!!!

    Love the poem and how they flowed. Very good write, I do have to say so. Best luck in contest and I thought it was sad.


  • Cannonsfire
    March 5, 2007
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    This is so amazing and I related to each and every stanza as I think I did all those things lol and you know she always smiled, for every childish attempt she loved unconditionally and I know how much you miss her for I miss mine still, even after twenty five years. Bless you

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