EXACTLY IN A MOMENT
TRUCK ME TO DESTINY --Please !
I request you again and again
No magic weaves No fantasy waves
No air born fights Or land mine blasts
I desire to reach you fast
Crossing over all the oceans Of obstacles
Make me feel happy there after my dear!
I ‘ll be on your lap.
I choose to move on
Very close to your bosom
Hug me! Kiss me!!
Wet my lips with the nectar’s honey drops
Pull me even forcibly to your closer side
I am yours for ever
Oh! my sweet darling!
My life’s beloved!
Truck me fast to destiny
I propose! in JUST a moment exactly
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Please tell me what you think
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Soooooooooo sweet !!
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WOW! This is soo deep! I love it!
Hug me! Kiss me!!
Wet my lips with the nectar’s honey drops
Pull me even forcibly to your closer side
Are my fav. Stanza! love it keep it up!
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Very well written my friend. Full of emotion. Love and passion. Oh my sweet darling & my lie's beloved, beautiful expressions. Keep up the good writing.. Katie
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I like a man who goes for it, irregardless of all the obtrusions
lol
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You must be a romantic to place a womans love so high they guide you to your destiny. Also thanks for your commemt on my poem, "Dare to dream-"
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Cute words!
Exactly given the true love in sweet words. Enjoyed a lot. The passion is clearly expressed in all the lines of the poem.Admirable!
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Beautiful
Hello there,
I have just finished reading your poem and wish to let you know just how much I have enjoyed the read.Your write is full of passion and the visuals within your written words are wonderful and so loving.I could see and feel every word written.
these lines listed below, really stood out the most for me...
Hug me! Kiss me!!
Wet my lips with the nectar’s honey drops
Pull me even forcibly to your closer side.
They are full of so much passion and desire.
a great write indeed my poet friend and a true pleasure to read.
Take care and many blessings to you.
Angel.
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great poem the imagery was amazing very well done indeed xxx
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Great job!
Purush, your username, means man, right? Now, this poem is great. It's got passion and flow. This is worthy of applause!
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YES
yes you are correct
i am 'purushothama'[maha vishnu] rao since abridged to suit others comfort in spelling
thank you and wish you all the best -
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Thank you.
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Falling into a submissive roll...well displayed. The imagery is well done...can be felt by the reader when reading...best of luck to you.
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A total submission. To be on the side of destiny,without taking so much..just in a moment..The desire welled up in last stanza..a good poem..thank you for sharing
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ohhh this is great so very deep and thought provoking "Truck me fast to destiny
I propose! in JUST a moment exactly"
loved those line just amazing...well done laura xx -
Sorry, this went over the line limit.
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please modified!
sorry
i made it short
plese accept if otherwise in order
purush
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obliged
sorry forthe overlook
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One moment is all it takes - a unique entry into this contest. Think one needs a black or white background though..
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