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Ambivalencified

Kiss me or Bite me
Those Frivolous lips clenching mine
Ferocious fangs quenching it's thirst
Eager tongue tasting my flesh
as those claws sink into my skin...

Hold me or Stab me
Clutch my waist and pull me closer
Drill those nails into my sides
Caress my cheeks with your silky hands
and rip it off my bloody bones...

Feel me or Neglect me
Sweat drips as I moan to your thrustful ways
Close the door on your way out
Come again to fulfill your needs
Tear me up and leave me to be...

Love me or Hate me
Your wondrous desires to be reality
Every inch of your body twitching to it's ejaculation
An expulsion beyond your wildest manifestations
Welcome to my world where nothing is as it seems...

-Cyrus

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Decompensated Ambivalence

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 5, 2007

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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!

    An excellent poem I liked reading this. this flowed really well and had a sense of distraction about it as though you were thinking these thoughts from another place,as though your mind had detrqcted from the whole scene you have depicted. I like that feel, most interesting.
    Well done to you

    If you need andy help here at AP please don't hesitate to ask
    Gaylene