When I open up my heart this is what I hear
The sound of heavens'angels
Ascending and descending
With choruses of Halelujahs
Around the Throne of God
The sound of prayers in beautiful notes
As magnificent unearthly tunes
From all over the earth
Rises to the heavens
The sound of many waterfalls
The voice of God
And all the lovely sounds
Of heavens'creatures,the birds,
And the joyous throng of loved ones there
And then I realize I am on this place
Called earth
Called to be a woman to convey
All that God and heaven means to me!
Author notes
If one has ears to hear the sounds of heaven and earth this is what one will hear plus the sound of the stars,singing as written in scripture...Unheard on this earth but to a few....this is my wish"
A contest entry
- Another 24 Hours # 2 by poetryality.
300 points, ended March 7, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a very nice poem I enjoyed reading it good job!! I loved the first line of this piece and the last. Keep up the good work. ~Ocean~
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its good
its a good poem, but ry to keep religion out of poetry for the sake of avoiding arguments.
two things no-one should talk about are religion and politics cuz every1 has different views.
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This is so beautifully written. I loved the way you started 'When I open up my heart this is what I hear' it touched me so much thank you for sharing this with us.
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this is such a magnificent piece. it truly reveals your feelings about God and heaven. the imagery that you use to convey your thoughts, that we are here for a reason and that earth is sort of a waiting room for heaven. can't wait to go home!
Very amazing!!
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Beautiful
This is a beautiful poem. For me it ended too soon. I felt like you had more in you to say. Even without more words this is a beautiful write. I think anyone who's a christian dreams about someday being in heaven. Yeah, we all have to realize that we are put on this earth for a purpose and that heaven will be here soon, because the rapture is on its way. So lets get right church and lets go home. Simply Beautiful.
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Wow, this is very beautiful with
some great imagery here. What a
wonderful feeling to have and sound
to hear! Well done with this and
good luck to you with it in the
contest! Thanks for sharing it here!
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Awww how beautiful this is and how creative you are with your words and descriptions as you created this poem. Nicely done poet. You have captured the reader and really brought them into your work!
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A beautifully written poem with a wonderful message. This is an inspiring write. I love the vivid descriptions. I can almost see and hear the angels singing. Wonderfully done.
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Wonderful
As a minister of the Gospel, I am always moved by powerful and beautiful praise lifted up to our heavenly Father. This is indeed a beautiful and uplifting piece. Thank you for sharing it. -
Lovely poetry
In all of my days of living no matter the cituation I have been able to see the beauty of the wonders of this earth . It really makes me upset to see the way people trash this earth and treat it as though they dont care. The indian people were the ones who was taught respect for this land . They didnt change it they didnt trash it and never took more than they needed to live . Look at it now for it brings tears to my eyes to know and see their was only one race the indians that truly deserved the land . For they saw and heard the spirites about them and never took it for granted . Now our throw away generation nothing is made to last and so many only see the almighty dollar and ignores the direction they are comeing to for without proper care of anything it will crumble -
So true
Written with such love . We as women do see and feel the beauty about us everyday and on what we see we share with as many as we can . For we are the key to mankind on this earth for without us the human race would surly die . And in time maybe man will realize we were not put on this earth only for maid service and bareing children we keep this world in order as much as they have let us . For there is not one job in this world that doesnt have women doing half the work yet still not recognized as being equal. I dont mean we should have the mens jobs no I mean if we are so stupid as some men see us why are we asked all the questions -
that is the best title although i was a bit dissapointed, not becuase the poem was bad becuae i had expected something different but great poem in any case
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'The Realm of Heaven and Earth'....
This is a wonderfully beautiful poem of something more then this world can give or does hold....
As always; I enjoyed the read/write and I thank you for sharing it with everyone and me too....
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Beautiful
With the love given at birth all one has to do is be silent and the song will be on the air . For I believe he in his love gave us the living all about us for our pleasures to bring a smile to the soul for those who chooses to listen
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Wow Great poem. Good job. I love this part: And then I realize I am on this place
Called earth
Called to be a woman to convey
Good luck in the contest!! -
~Amazing Grace and Beautifully Penned~
Your heart hears what heaven is singing.
Thank you dear fellow poet for bringing this song of love to me.
For now, I fully understand the meaning of being here ten thousand years. Divine the “voice of God” and his glorious angels do release all our fears. ~Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally~ Love Sharon~
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Excellent
Here I am once again to read one off your magnificent creations...
What a beautiful message you have left us with in this poem...I am also but a woman placed on earth to tell the world what God means to me...I am so happy that I have found like minded poets on this site...Oh let His word reign...
Thank you ao much for sharing this with us
Much Love
Many Blessings
Tessa
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very nice
my first impression is your an angel. I liked the opening lines, " When I open up my heart this is what I hear
The sound of heavens'angels
Ascending and descending". that gave me the imagery of a different view and it works with the ending too. good write sweetie.
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Beautiful and inspirating
The beauty in the blessings that god gives us when we obey his words and live accordingly to his will. I felt such a connection to this poem which really inspired me and filled me with hope. I thank you so much for sharing this with me and I know that god blessed the hand that wrote it... Congrats in your challenge
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Well done. This is beautiful.
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Does Heaven Take Requests
Cuz if they don't have Metal then I don't want it. I'll Thrash with the Demons to Hell's Bells in the Mosh Pit Inferno. Don't misunderstand me as I am Alone in my views and mean not to offend or disrespect you or your beliefs. I enjoyed your jovial and melodious message of hope. Rock on
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Beautiful
this is very beautiful write indeed.. so soft, and lovely at the same time. your imagery was perfect, along with the flow...
fabulous write, sis
black goddess
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great
~smiles~ this is very good. Greatly written, to say the least. I can really hear the waterfalls and unearthy tunes-wow.
*star
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!!!!!!!!!!!loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is as beautiful as it gets. for me this sings like a symphony of thoughts and softly in the conveyance of the most beautiful of harmony's. Great job with your thoughts with this one!!!!
-brian.
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Awesome
awesome write! I loved it. I would appluad it but im out of free points and im saving up to make a contest -
spiritual
great writing and very moving
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Thoughtful
The Bible aptly describes many events that occurs in the heaven, and many beyond our comprehension as humans to fully understand.
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Very Good
I really enjoyed this read. It is as God voice has spoken through this poem especially this part: The sound of many waterfalls
The voice of God
And all the lovely sounds
Of heavens'creatures,the birds,
And the joyous throng of loved ones there
This is just lovely. God has given you a beautiful talent, I am very glad to see that you are using it. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing, Melody
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Wonderful the imagery was astounding I really did enjoy this write you did an excellent joy on it. Thank you for sharing.
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i love this poem!!!
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Beautiful
Rose Angel beautifully written. The emotion you show is awesome. You write lovely poems. It flows nicely and you want to keep reading. God Bless Rose Angel
HAPPYMOMMA
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Bravo!
I really like everything about this work of art. The word selection sets everything up nicely. The imagery, emotion, and message work very well. Great write my poet friend. ~Peace~Gary -
Awesome
I'm completly taken in with this poem and it's words.If one could listen as you do with a sea shell,you would get the same affect.at least that is my vision.the sound of Heavens Angels,Beautiful notes, Magnificent tunes. with sounds from many waterfalls.The sound of Gods voice.with all our loved ones.This makes for a heavenly Piece.Very nice poem Rose I just Loved it. I do hope you win the contest. Brenda
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angel of the dead
hey rose angel,
i love it u need to keep it in the contest. it is beautiful. i give you 3 applaud. love ya angela
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angel of the dead
Dear Angela: I do thank you for your comments on my "Heaven and Earth" poem....You are given 6 points for your comments..Always encouraging to get encouragement from the young poets...Keep in touch....Rose Angel
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Very beautifully written mom. I love your use of words and imagery, it gives this write a perfect flow. Keep up the great writes.
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The sound of many waterfalls
The voice of God
interesting thought -
Beautiful
A beautifully crafted testimony that reveals your wisdom and understanding of human purpose in this world. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
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Beautiful
Well put, I love the way the story developed I love the picture you painted, Absolutely wonderful Write on poet
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You have captured my heart with this poem causing me to smile. Your ability to publicly pronounce your faith and your realization that it is a relationship with God and not religion shows me the depth of your character. This piece of art is well done with its fluidity and image merged to melt into my mind. You have such a beautiful way of expressing yourself and allowing me to see into your spirit.
Love,
Amera
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GRATE
gr8 poem here hun -x-x-x
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Beautiful...!!! if only we realized and took time to see n listen to the miracles around us...!!
Thanks for the sweet reminder...! Beautiful imagery... you cud have used a few more descriptive words.. but over all the poem has a lovely un earthly feel to it.. which makes it an absolute pleasure to read!!!
Good job!!!
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Nicely written
Wish so to, what you wrote. It will be great to hear the angels sing. Love the poem! Good luck in contest and all you do in life.
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Very Good
I think you do well
to bring yourself this close to God
My closest moments
are in my dreams where I see his word unfolded
I offer my prayers that he may listen as he chooses
I am helpless on this earth except as he calls me.
This is well said in verse by you
Rick
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'the sound of many waterfalls' nicely done, although im not one for thrones, the beautiful vibes radiate from this whatever the language, as you inspire the mind set of prayer elegantly describing the ladders passage especially with waterfall as this puts the quenching tone of the emptyness surrounding us and convenning with our spirit.... as so for nobles truths of energetic proportions i thank you for an elegant write.
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beautifully said. you sure know how to capture the beauty of heaven on earth.
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The thought of the stars singing..what a wonderful illusion, for to view God in his grace would be to hear the universe in choir. This is delightful penning.
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This is beautiful! It is intensely spiritual and sings to the spirit. I too open my heart when in meditation and hear the heavenlies. What a wondrous sound it is indeed. I know that the Lord is saying; "well done my good and faithful servant". What an inspirational work this is. It simply makes me sigh.
Thank you ever so much for this inspirational entry you've submitted into my contest. I wish you all the very best.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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This poem contains very strong feelings of joy, and you put that across very well. You have a big heart, and when you open it up beautiful pieces of writing like this tumble out. So keep it open for us please. Thank you for sharing this lovely and lovingly crafted poem with us. Keep it up.
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beautiful poem auntie! Though, this normally isn't exactly my cup of tea poetry, I really do admire your vision and deep rooted spirituality and love. BEAUTIFULLY worded, wonderful use of imagery and emotion. You shine here my dear aunt.
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God's presence is all around us - in the sounds, sights, even the smells that inhabbit our planet. Your opening line pulls the reader in with the reminder that all it takes is an open heart to see and appreciate all we have. Beautiful work that flows quite nicely. Good luck in the contest!
Much love,
~J.
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Beautifully written. I loved the whole poem. Great job. I enjoyed the sounds of heaven.
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the spirituality in this is very uplifting.when you hear these sounds then you know that Jesus has began his reign over the earth and judgement is upon us.my best to you in the contest.
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Very powerful and so beautifully stated...given to us to read and be blessed by beautiful images to adorn our senses with His omnipotence. Great job! I loved the read! Smiles, Terry
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This was very nice to read....I should have thought of something this beautiful. It is our destiny to convey this message.
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For when the gates of heaven open, the joyous calls of horns and angels he has promised. God's soft spoken words like that of a waterfall. Angels in greeting to welcome us into his pure light. Amazing in style and context. Good luck in the contest. ~Sie
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