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Misty Shadows

The midnight sky –
So full of twinkling illumination
blankets the earth below.

Shadows fill every corner,
ambiguity surrounds every creature.
A haven may be found, within this realm of darkest beauty.

The sense that you are alone and
A fleeting awareness of peace,
Only lends to the impression of anonymity.

Tread warily within this world of misty shadows,
where death and mystery are forever entwined.
For what you find - may be your own demise.

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  • ladysnowowl57
    April 4, 2007

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    Ooooh Cool one. Made me look over me shoulder sis. I love your writes they are always unexpected! Another awesome poem Keep on penning sister. I look foreward to your next one. BRAVO!


  • capricornpoet
    March 6, 2007
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    In shadows

    A sense of curiosity bathes in this prose, a mystic quality of what lives in darkness,


  • joyya
    March 5, 2007
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    Good! I like this one. Really spooky.