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More purposely Bad Crap Poetry, to be removed ASAP

sometimes poetry really stinks, ya know?
I Hate it when peple refuse; to tenf to there works like,
I dunno grammer, and Spelling and stuff like this is
and seem to sort of ramebl and chit and chat chittering is bad
and formless crap is worsed
Don't they knew this is their own, gerden, and needs
work to grow
and flurich
it is like a big bald splatt on
the page sotra like ,
a stain whith from blood layeded on the church floore

T
H
E
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They try to be    r  a  e  e
                C  E  T  V

which would be foin but they even
manages to flock dat chit uppen stuff

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OMGDS now THIS is BAD!!!!!! Dun ASK!!!

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  • Recluse Writer gold member
    March 5, 2007
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    Leave it...leave it...and so say all of us!!!
    ME/MYSELF & I


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    March 5, 2007
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    Er Um????

    Bravo...three jeers...I mean cheers for the Lady!!!
    I no watt ewe mean..
    r a e e
    C E T V

    so you have your own system going but please for the sake of my marbles ...do explain...I beg you Peg


    • Lady-Pegasus
      March 7, 2007
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      LOL

      HAve you ever seen someone use 'random punctuation'? this is a unique idea, but when they dun bother to align it it looks like crap and makes no sense!! This is suppossed to be 'creative' pusposely misaligned and misspelled!


      • Recluse Writer gold member
        March 7, 2007

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        Gotchya now...bit slow on the uptake because it WAS misspelled...aye yie yie my poor marbles are going beresk here


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    March 4, 2007

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    WOO HOO ! !

    " GO YOU GOOD THING " Geez I'm glad I removed my first attempt, would hate for you to banish me to the land of crap poets


  • Welcome-To-Hell
    March 4, 2007

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    What the hell is this it makes no sense at all you werent kidding this looks like something my 2 year old daughter might have written it horrible way to go


    • Lady-Pegasus
      March 4, 2007
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      Well, Matt ( youngest son) says leave it as a lesson to other to NOT do it, hehe

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