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Live your life

                              We know it's true,
                    and we know that there are things to hide
                                from others
                            We have dreams,
                              we have love
                      but the world doesn't give us enough!
                                We complain,
                      and we know it's true don't lie.
                            We annoy others,
                        but God gave us the gift of life,
                                  so be thankful
                              for what you've got.
                Don't whine about what you don't have.
                              Be happy,
                          To live your life
                            and only yours.
                          Some have clothes,
                          and some don't have their homes,
                            So give alittle love,
              and help the ones who don't have as much as you.
                          Live your life happyily
                          You better be thakful!
                              Live your live
                            Forget about the problems!
                        Live your life
                      Don't have any worries,
                          Just live your life!
                          Be happy,
                          be nice,
                        be kind to others
                          The ones who aren't very lucky.
                          Be thaknful
                          For the good deeds, you've done.
                            Be happy,
                        Set your troubles aside
                      and live your life!
                          Don't worry
                          Realx
                              R
                              E
                              A
                              L
                              X
                          kick back.
                      And live your life!

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  • Sinned Alchemist
    March 18, 2007
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    weirdo pretty good i guess


  • The Squeeze
    March 11, 2007

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    Fascinating in the greatest way ever!

    haha, relax? An absolutely wonderful ending! A very nice peice of poetry, a beautiful meaning as well. Well done mari


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 5, 2007

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    This is another great poem! I really do need to relax. I have to finish a online Health course within the next couple of weeks and I have a million things to still do on it, I just got a biology project that is worth two and a half tests which is very long research paper and in Math I am not doing to well. So I really needed to read this poem. Thank you!

    Mem


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 5, 2007

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    you know this is advice i needed to hear but i wonder if i will follow it, you did a great job on this keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    March 4, 2007
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    *****

    Nice Job Water!!! You did a great job of getting your point across!!! good luck in the contest!!! oh and in line twenty-two you misspelled thankful. just thought you might want to fix that. again nice work!!!

    -Steve-


  • fire angel 088
    March 4, 2007

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    thanks

    thanks for the poem, truely i need to do that, im just having a hard year, and last year..thank you for entering
    Fire Angel

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