It all came crashing when I smashed myself in the face
When I drove on the highway where it was the ending of my chase
The racing thoughts of when will this ever end
When will I become normal again?
Will they ever stop laughing at this poor little girl
the one with deadness in her eyes
The feel of the room can be cut with a knife
Everyday is a struggle to just be loved and liked
I want to feel good, and not to be feared of
thought of as a weirdo and not to be sneered at
I want to voice my opinion and tell the world my thoughts
I want to be looked upon
The panic button has been turned on
When will it end? Its ok with time I will have my revenge
When I'll get what I want and be free from my head
A contest entry
- Take me away by --Beautiful--.
685 points, ended March 19, 2007, 22 entries
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Locked In A Room Of The Mind
All that you see is your thought's flowing, running, like water into the sands of hate. The first thing you have to do is put aside your anger for yourself. Then you can find a way to escape your self. You are the only one stopping you. Let go, live, and be free. This has been a very good poem, I just had to say this based on the feeling it conveys.
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i liked this poem and I can relate to it but I think you could've put more feeling into it, just a little handy advice for future writes. Be sure to put down exactly what you feel and that is what makes the best poems...Awesome poem and good luck!!
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hey everyone, i want you to know i am strong and i want you to follow these strenghts, i want you to learn that you will be ok ilove you xoxoxoxoxoxo by evanesecnence....all the sanity in me this pain is jusut to real whip away away all of you tears...you still hurt on mee...................... but tho your still with ive been alone alll along!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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be right back
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hey i am glad your true clors are showing
im glad that you are trying trying to do wHAT You can
i love you
thats how it should be
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hey
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ur comment mEANS SOMETHIN
HEY HEY I LOST A FRIEND A COUPLE YEARS AGO AND I MISS HER HER SO FUCKIN MUCH. EVEN THO SHE WAS AN ALCOHOLIC AND DRUG ADDICT SHE WAS AN AMAZING PERSON, AND I LOVE HER SO FUCKIN MUCH AND I MISS HER. SOMETIMES I FEEL LIKE SHE IS THE ONLY ONE THAT COULD UNDERSTAND ME. i KNOW THAT NOT TRUE CUZ SOME CHICK THAT I WAS DOING A "POLISHED" LAYOUT FOR SAID THAT SHE GOT KICKED OUT BECAUSE OF WHAT SHE DID ECT. CUTTING, BUT i KNOW PEOPLE WHO DO THAT EVEN IF YOU THINK THEY ARE MENTAL IT IS JUST A WAY OF EXPRESSION, SOMETIMES PEOPLE DONT HEAR YOU AND THE ONLY WAY FOR THEY TO LISTEN, UNFORTUNAtely, is for you to see scars.. i can relate, iv told my professors that i can not perform in front of them because i have such anxiety. growing up i was not allowed to talk at the dinner tablw,i was not allowed to talk ever in the presence of my father. so that is why i know i can not talk in front of many people. which fuckin suckd, iys so frustrating because i want to be able to show my true colors.......
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Moving...I know how this feels. Everyday seems harder and pointless but you still push through. Good write! Powerful and emotional. And it helps that most people can relate. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
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