I'm falling for him
Slowly but surely
I succumb to the pull
Of his loving ways, words, and actions
He knows not yet what he's doing
But I'm falling hard
Now all he has to do is realize it and catch me
But he won't do that and I know it
So I'll continue to fall
Until one day
When I just hit the ground
And look up to see him
Laughing at me with his friends
Down at me, for he'll realize
That he could've caught me
But he didn't
He let me fall
A contest entry
- Heartbreak... by BittersweetPhantasm.
525 points, ended March 14, 2007, 17 entries
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Aww...this is sooo sad. It makes me want to cry. Which is a good thing because that's what it suppose to do. Good luck in the contest! I hope you win because this is a heart-filled, astounding poem. Excellent write!
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