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I walk away

                              The things go good
                              The things go bad,
                          But I'm still wating here for my love one.
                    Waiting for Mr.Right
                          I walk away when I feel the pain
                    But it keeps following me
                          Get away from me!
                        It follows me every where!
                            Get away from me
                      Leave me alone.
                      I wanna have my own space!
                              Get out
                        Get away from me
                              I've got to get away from here
                  I cant run away for ever!
                      But it keeps following me!
                    Leave me alone,
                      Let me be,
                      Take me away, 
                        From this mess,
                        Let's go ahead and get from this place,
                          Leave me alone once again!
                        This place is not good.

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  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 5, 2007

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    This is a great poem! I really feel what your feeling within your words. It is good to sometimes just "walk away" or to vent out through poetry or a friend. Great write!

    Mem


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 5, 2007

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    sometimes that is what you need to do, walk away and i think this poem expresses one of those times, you did a great job on this, keep it flowing


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    March 4, 2007

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    Great job water I loved it!!! Really emotional and I love the background!!! keep up the good work!!!!

    -Steve-