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Silent Tunes


Silent tunes
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"When I open my heart, this is what I hear.
All nonsensical aberrations all through the windows

.."Who are you dear to question my Credentials?
I am a born lover
I loved the 'gracious garden' before my court yard
The fruits I loved from  my kitchen plants
I loved the 'waving sea' in its entirety
I loved the ,sizzling sky' courting before the moon and stars
I loved the exciting fire enraged in me
I love the life I am blessed with?

When I open my heart, this is what I hear.
All nonsensical aberrations all through the windows

Who are you dear to question my Credentials?

i reposedt the confidenc in  you and  rested with you a blind  belief
l got attracted and entwined physically with your sweet smiles
now some how you got a grouse against my hobbies listed above
I say you are  not at all cruel but symptoms of sadism made you so  worse

When I open my heart, this is what I hear.
All nonsensical aberrations all through the windows

Who are you dear to question my Credentials?



After having deep acquaintance with me for long
He expects my love to flow and stream only towards him
I can’t desist from my tastes which I developed over since my child hood
I didn’t speak affirmatively in this regard
Hence this mess

Buds of roses may come in a week
Sure to bloom in a couple of days
Fade away and loose petals there after in hours

Yet the so sweet fragrance it waved will be there till months/years together
If you want to be aloof sincerely tell me.
I will shut all the windows of my heart and  sing silence tunes to my soul
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  • poetryality silver member
    March 6, 2007

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    This is quite the intense work of poetry. Seems this heart has been exposed, and darkened with misfortune. Broken and tattered, this heart needs mending. Sometimes we have to harden our hearts for them to find softness. A very heart-filled work. I love the fact that this is not written from a heart that has knows nothing but love because that is reality, that is life. Excellent!


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