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This Feeling

    This feeling
As I watch my friends fade away
I can't stop the future
I am made to remember the past
You are all moving on
And I can't get a gripe
My mind is swirling and twirling
I can't think straight
All I see is plain white
I am scared of moving on
And I can't get over you all disappearing
I make this the feeling go away
    This feeling
  That I am alone 
I stay here in the past
    Cause it seems
    I can't move on

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  • HoldMe
    March 4, 2007

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    Trust me, I'm not moving on Jaime...I am absolutely not. And if you think I am then dig your nails into my wrists to make me stop (just not to hard lol). Anyways, this is awesome!!