I wonder
I wonder
What would she be like?
A bubbly little girl
Ten, eleven, twelve.
A bright young girl
With a bright smile
And a dark past
I wonder
What would she be like?
If she were an angel on earth
Author notes
i recently met the family of a little girl i tried to save for the first time. before today they only saw me once getting pulled in to an ambulance after being resusitated. tears have fallen a lot today. we promised to keep in touch
Please tell me what you think
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i think that is good that you met them, it is important, to keep in touch, you may wanna know about the person you tired to save and they may wanna know about you, keep it flowing
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i am glad i found out she was only 5. she was a very pretty girl with a very warm smile i was offered a picture of her. i couldn't take it though
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Aww Mark. It's beautiful. No...let me rephrase that...You are beautiful. You truly are something amazing Mark. Keep writing from within. I'll always love you.
See you around the deep end
moment liver
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Skylar you really have a knack for embarrasing me and i love you for it
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haha, glad to bring color to somebody's cheeks.
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This is very sad.. but very good and obviously heatfelt.
Great great write, and God Bless.
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This is a nice job. Leaving a question unanswered. It makes me wonder what it's about.
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it tells you what it is about in the authors note. five years ago i tried to save a small girl who up until today i have never known about her short life. i died in the attempt as well
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