When I open my heart, this is what I hear,
a throbbing tone from sweet caresses,
no hand has ever given.
Touches from lips never met,
hugs, my arms have yet to feel.
Founts of my fiery needs and deep desires
are rivers pouring from my well of untapped sensuality,
waiting the day someone will at last drink their beauty.
Night curses my passion's aching soap opera,
phantom lovers come to play, praying I'll see their face,
among the throngs of flesh born reality
where princes could be any frog.
Each morning hoping my prayer will be answered,
and there will be that perfect knight
who'll say the words
to make me know love's precious
flutter.
A contest entry
- Another 24 Hours # 2 by poetryality.
300 points, ended March 7, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Gorgeous-
Holy Momma
This is one Gorgeous verse You have penned!!
You can verse anything...
from a matter of minutes from the Heart
Loved this Masterpiece!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings always
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you love as always for being so beautiful.
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You imagery is stunning and the metaphors spring from the page. There is longing written here and wanton desire that floods the page. Very finely crafted poet.
Thank you ever so much for the time spent to enter my challenge. I wish you all the best.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I'm thrilled you enjoy my entry.
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this is sort of shakespearen.it has a tragic tone that makes those plays so good.this is like the words spoken by person with unrequited love eating away at them.my best to you in the contest.
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Thank you so much for the great comments. They are really appreciated.
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Passion's Flurries
A passionate flurry of tender thoughts so gently poised upon the parchment. Beautiful.
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Thank you for your kind comments.
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This is a really strong piece. I can see experience from your word choice and flow. Great write.
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Thank you so much for you kind comment.
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You have the most golden pen when it comes to writes like this, just beautiful as always, Bella
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Thank you Bella.
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