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Love Jouney

 

     "when I open my heart,              this is what I hear.."      

                birds flowing  in the    air   as if love was

                     the oceans wave blowing forward

                          forming  the  sand  into 

                                words    of   love

                                     and trust

 

      For love        will be as 

          the  endless nights

               candle only

                    hope

                   

                      we will                 never,

                 never  will we       live   life to

                         dreams   because our

                             love is forever

                                    more

 

                   

Author notes

"for the picture"

Art Work:

"Sound"
by Theresa Lucero
item #: 11743553B

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  • poetryality silver member
    March 6, 2007

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    This is beautiful! The presentation is stunning. The work leaves me at peace. It makes me feel like it was written especially for me, as if you are speaking directly to my heart. Simply Beautiful!

    Thank you ever so much for the time spent to enter my challenge with this lovely work of word art.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • dragontuba
    March 5, 2007

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    Thank you so much....I try to let people feel what I feel through poetry and to do that means that I have expressed what I feel for the person in this poem.


  • queenie
    March 5, 2007

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    the imagery in this shows your creative ability.it emphasizes the effect that you want your words to have.my best to you in the contest.


  • penman gold member
    March 4, 2007

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    Excellent

    I really enjoyed your form. I think it gives your poem and words such wonderful embellishment. Good luck in the contest.


    • dragontuba
      March 4, 2007
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your comment,,I also loved your poetry, good luck in the contest...Can I add you as fav....?

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