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Sunrise

Maybe I'm asking for a little
Too much
But Baby
I want the sunrise

Could it be that
I get a lot
But not enough

I don't want to settle
For anything less
Than butterflies
And reds melting into blues

Horizons in the distance
Screaming
Wake up
And make your dreams realities

I want to stay awake
All night
And just be by your side

Maybe I'm asking for a little
Too much
But
Baby
I want to see
The sun rise
Sitting next to you

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  • Acronym
    March 6, 2007
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    Simple but sweet. And its very interesting. I definitely like the ending lines

    "I want to see
    The sun rise
    Sitting next to you"

    That part was very creatively done. Its a nice fitting end
    I really enjoyed it, and good luck in the contest

    -Acronym