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Make Love To Me!

Dim the lights as you let your essence flow into mine.

Come into my spirit, upon love's delilacies do dine.

Beguile my heart with the tentacles of your passion.

Design my zeal for you, wear me like the latest fashion.

 

 

 

 

 

Kiss the nectar-stained tears from my eyes as they flow.

Plant your seeds of endless devotion within my womb to grow.

Hypnotize my senses with the pulse of your wanton desire.

Grace my feminity with a crystal kiss from the fruit of your fire.

 

 

 

Partake of the delights of my comely treasure trove,

thus inhale the alluring fragrance of my womanly grove.

Ascend to the heights of pleasure that are yours for the asking,

a fusion of you and me wrapped in a rainbow of love everlasting.

 

                          Marjorie Joyce Leslie

                          03/04/07

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    March 11, 2007

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    Stupendous!!!!

    A very worthy piece!!!

    Gorgeous...

    Just a suggestion....the font color is a little blurry on the eyes...


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 10, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    Wonderful works my friend, congrates on your HM in this contest! I love ya sweet soul, peace and poetry~ xo Love Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 10, 2007

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    beautiful!

    Very passionate and feminine!

    "Design my zeal for you, wear me like the latest fashion."
    Brilliant line!

    I really liked this poem...It celebrates being a woman!
    Lynda


  • Diamond
    March 5, 2007
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    Tastefully Composed!

    Oy Vey! I'm not sure what that means but it was the first thought that came to mind after reading your poem. My gosh, you're really lighting sensually sweet seductive fires out there. Keep up the great work. This is a sure winner in my eyes. Avril


  • DragonessTawnya
    March 5, 2007
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    Very nicely done. I love the language, tone, feel, and flow. I hope you win the gold.


  • Writeous
    March 4, 2007
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    i love this piece..it has a very soft caress of love..

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