love as never
I felt my soul leaping
off of the edge until
our life saw such
beautiful
eyes
to describe what physical love
The hazle green blossom in your hair forms
my every desire, my every delight of the day
as yet a rain drop of emotion from you
could not keep my hands flowing the
ink into a emotional page of love
yet not even the lightest
shadows can dis-form my
what promise I am
bond to for
you
my love my soul
To dream of you would be as if
the rivers of earth flow the soul
into my wish of complexity
ever-green garden that
will blossom over
time for your
eyes
to let even
my heart beat is as if the
world would stop to hear
the soul pump into
your veins of
love
I will never stop
loving the person
who gave her
life to
me
Please tell me what you think
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WOW
This is a very moving piece, your right I did like it. Thanks for the heads up, I look forward to reading your next work. Keep writing. LaTa
~APRIL~
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omfg the visual is ~ A W E S O M E ~
... and the words are cool too
not a lot of people could do that, you know...
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yeah,,that spell check...I'll fix it..after I read your tear drop...I was like i want to do a peom from the heart and create form to it....I fix the vanes part..anyway..I had this poem in my mind for my girlfriend I just didn't get to it until now...thank you very much..the words from the heart I find are so powerful...
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oooooooooh... wow
wow, beautiful, wow, lots of pretty hearts and they looks so good, fantastic work here!!wow, it needs no other words, and even if i could find them,they would not come out!!! wow! pretty, shapes, and an underlying current of everlasting devotion, the last heart is my favourite!
'another little spelling error, (spell check doesn't work very well), in the 2nd to last heart, vanes, is spelt veins'
Another fantastic wow piece.
Smiles, and take care XxX
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