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Stupid mutt

Stupid mutt
stuck in the door
with a flower in your butt
while I choose to ignore.

Im feeling catty
and oh so cool
while your feeling fatty
driping with drool.

you better get the butter
so you can squeeze out of that hole.
I see your tounge begin to flutter
Just out of reach from your doggy bowl.

skinny kitty
over and out.
feeling so itty-bitty
without a doubt!

Author notes

The point of veiw of the cat.

Oh and by the way.. I hate cats. Im more of a dog person myself. I just felt that the cats point of veiw would be a better choice for this poem

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  • BabyFox Amberlight
    May 19, 2007

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    aww..the poor dog. cats are soooo mean. except my cats. my cats think my dog is a big brown kitty cat nice write...keep up the great work my friend.

    ~Fox


  • honey bear
    March 17, 2007

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    thank you for entering and good luck with this very funny write, i can picture the dog trying to reach his bowl that is just out of reach


  • Airybe
    March 12, 2007

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    That cat better be lucky that poochiee is stuck. Besides your poem was quite funny, not LOL funny but still smirk funny. Smirk... not smurf. Get it? Got it? Good.


  • chihuahuadog1992
    March 7, 2007
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    That is hilarious and so like a cat's pint of view, arrogent and pompous


  • Saxyncreative
    March 5, 2007
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    Definitly an image... like whoa...


    dogs rule.. cats drool...

    lol


  • LAPoe gold member
    March 5, 2007

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    Now see, me I love 's so this is purr-fect...
    You've written a funny little ditty, no doubt.
    laurie.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 4, 2007

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    LOL This is so biotchy!!! Perfect for cats must think. I really enjoyed this.

    Jeannie


  • My Darkness
    March 4, 2007

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    i'm not a fan of cats, lol, but i think this is very creative! you've done very well with this! thanks for sharing! and keep on writing... good luck as well!

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