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When talking seems all I can do

When talking seems all I can do
I値l verbally fight for all of you
I値l speak my mind for all to fear
With words of truth for all to hear

I値l smile until I can no more
Your inspiration I implore
Guide my dreams and heart and soul
Toward my life痴 ultimate goal

We値l stand amongst the stars that shine
Eating tuna in chunks of brine
Merry is the lover痴 rose
That passion that inside us grows

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    March 6, 2007

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    This was such a lovely piece and flowed so sweetly. "Eating tuna in chunks of brine." That was very original. Well done to yet another lovely poem.


  • Best-to-the-Fall
    March 4, 2007
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    this makes me smile... a lot