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Born of the 9th month


Born of the 9th month
A Virgo, September,
The fire of her soul
A delicate ember

She smiles,
That simple perfect smile
What lies beneath, I sit and ponder?
Lonely hearts,
Do they grow fonder?

A poet to my surprise, she is
Loves the styles and all within
English her subject
One of many skills,
A lifetime of with time to fill

Born of the 9th month
A Virgo, September,
The fire of her soul
A delicate ember

Her hair,
Golden locks of grace
Soft clear skin
A kind and warming face

She speaks in gentle speech,
Her words soft and full of meaning
She knows where she is,
She knows where she is going,
She knows how she will
For her passion is flowing

Born of the 9th month
A Virgo, September,
The fire of her soul
A delicate ember

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Another poem for a friend.

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  • cafegroundzero gold member
    April 7, 2007

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    Classic encomium to a classmate

    Good use of repetition or repeated stanza, which could even be a chorus in a song. Good use of rhyme.

    Such a description SP gives that a reader could feel affection toward the object of the lyrical eye (I).