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The Key To Wisdom

Unlock your mind,open up your eyes to face understanding
Search for fear,for its hard to find.
It comes and goes like a flash of light
where does it reunite no one knows

Enter the enter-self,through the capital C,the door
labeled for courage,and curiosity. For their you may find it
buried in some mystical world with feelings both belligerent
and highly illiberal.

After you've shaped,and embedded all knowledge deeply into your
subconscious mind,then you may leave through the very small c
shaped door.

For their you may receive your bachelor of science degree
for you've just gained the knowledge...,of common sense.  The key to Wisdom.

Author notes

One might ask the question,what is common sense?. actually their is nothing common about it. It's an amazing ability which allows us to function,a gift from God just to remind us just how much God loves us.
but that's just my opinion. what's yours?

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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    December 6, 2007
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    This is brilliant. I love how you have written this. The imagery here is great and you have put forward such a powerful message. Your poems are so thought provoking and I love that. I have never looked at "common sense" this way, and actually I quite like your view. Great work.