I know you think I am weak
really though I am strong,
I know this because,
I am still holding on.
Holding on to a love
that I know was true,
that's the reason why
I haven't given up
of there being a me & you.
I guess maybe I should,
seeing that you don't see things
the same way that I do.
I am making the choices
that are right for my life,
I cant make you a factor
in figuring out what is right.
This is why,
I let you say goodbye.
It tore my heart in two,
to let you walk away,
You moved on so quickly
before we were even through,
and for some stupid
crazy and ridiculous reason,
I'm still in love with you.
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Written June 26th, 2003
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great write! keep it up! i really like this piece! love it -carolyn
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like the other comments I know how you felt/feel. This just said everything I have felt am feeling. Great writing. i will be back for more!!! Thankyou for you words on my scribbling also. I would appreciate more comments, to keep me on my toes..
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Wow, I know what you mean although I have to let him go I'll always be in love with him and no one can take that away! Thanks so much for commenting on my poems! Great write! Keep up the good work! -Tina (hinamcmullen)
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The heart demands without surcease,
Giving not a moments peace,
A thing no womens mortal state,
Could ever hope to contemplate.
She speaks a dream that none can hear,
You're sleepwalking again my dear.
8angel*
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awwwww that poem is so sweet!
Ive been in that situation myself bout this time last yr, and believe me although it seems hard now, time does heal and he will soon be a distant memory!!
I love ur style of writin, well dun!
Jen xxxxxx -
this poem is so awesome!! it really speaks to me cause i know how that feels right now... my bf & i are having problems (read The Worst Thing if you wanna find out more about that) & i think we have to say good-bye eventhough thats the last thing i want to do! keep writing!!
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Your not alone here. i like this poem its voice hit me a certain way. i guess thats cause i can feel whats in it. be strong dont let lost love get in the way of your life. itll trip you over and over till you cant stand the pain anymore.. but this is a great write ...peace
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Tahnnks fro the comment, and this poem is just wonderful, i really dont think i could have read a better poem right now cause i had a person in mind after writing a comment on my last poem.. i said goodbye to someone seemed like thats hwta they wonted but i couldnt find anyways that ist was the right thing, and it seemed like they moved on or moved me out of their head really fast and i dont understand cause that person still has a big part of my heart and i still hold on to any moment i can have that person back, i still hold on to him even if he is gone.. its a horrible feeling loving somene that dont love you and having someone love you when you love someone else..bah great write thanks for sharing ~nikki
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The thing I hate most of all is even though the boy hurt ya so much you will ALWAYS have something there for him. Whether it is a feeling/emotion/thought/memory... it's always going to be there! Nicely done! *sonya*
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good poem. a lot of times you have to make that decision to take someone you love out of your life for it to be better for you. it's happened to me, but i think i was more in love with the feeling i have, then the person themself.
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You were right when you said that two lines couldn't really describe this poem.It has a certain ambience of loveliness that cannot be contained in a single couplet.It was very beautifully written,and I enjoyed reading it.
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That is right...How love hurts...But still...we cannot live without it...You say I hate but instead of it it is love...Cause love and hate walks hand in hand...
Thanx it was very beautiful....and intreresting write...
sajonara
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great
That right Girl!!Hold on don't let anything that means that much to you go material or person. I think that it was well written and shows alot of emotion, as usal lol, Very good job I really liked it and thank you for your post yet again
Talk to you later my friend,
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I can relate to these feelings. You write from your heart which makes great poetry. of their being a me & you.....their should be there. (Just hoping to help) Great write!
TD
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this is brilliant - i loved how u expressed urself.
keep up the great work.
love, emma xxxxx -
VERY WELL
I HAVE BEEN THERE ALSO I HOPE THINGS ARE BETTER AND YOUR POEM IS FROM YOUR HEART -
That was a terrific write. I used to be able to relate to it. Its a sad poem, yet its so good. I flows great. Keep writing. You are very good at it.
Sarah -
Awww..I think alot of people can relate to this, I can. Everything flowed perfectly and your definitely right, it would take more then 2 lines to get this point across...lol
Well keep on writing.
*Jackie*
Great Job
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