I gave him fair warning, he knew it was mine,
But he just had to try it, couldn’t tow the line,
“That’s my way in“, I said “It’s my flap,
Not meant for dogs”, Oh, how I could slap
That enormous great bum that’s stuck in my hole,
What gives him the right to take the cats role?
I’ll just add a flower to enhance the sight,
Could be stuck for life, or at least over night.
I’ll sneak in the front door and lie in his bed,
I’ll maybe throw up, just where his head
Will lie on the blanket, when he feels lazy,
He’ll remember the cat with the bright yellow daisy.
Author notes
A poem from the cats perspective
A contest entry
- fun pic inspired by honey bear.
600 points, ended March 17, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this way funny write that had me laughing so hard my jaw is still aching
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LOL! I love it. The picture is just as funny as the poem I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Your piece was funny and warm and makes you feel good after to have read it.
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Brilliant
Hahahaha Brilliant. I loved this
Very very funny indeed. Great imagery here Sue.
Your Darkmaster
xx
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This is too cute! A very humorous poem that has brightened my day. Good luck in the contest.
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lol.. this is sooo cute! yet looks so wrong! lol.. what a creative write! i really enjoyed this! thanks for sharing!
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Wowzers this was amazingly fantaftic
, I love this piece a lot, I can see you put lots of effort in this poem, you have a
great mind for creating poetry, and I hope you get lots of lovely comments for this amazingly fantastic poem, lol,
I can see you enjoyed writing this magical piece and I can see lots of other people will ike it when you read some more of their
lovely comments, Thanks for sharing this amazing piece and well done,
lots of love ~ Gem ~
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This is just wayyy tooo cute, lol! Loved this! Thank you for sharing the giggles; I wish you all the best in this contest!
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Excellent
Sue this was really funny , I saw the dog stuck in the door, then saw the flower I started to roar, the poem brought tears to my eyes as I luaghed, to see that fat dog with that stuck in his a--. Brilliant take on this picture Sue wishing you all the very best in this contest Love Brian.xx
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WAY TOO FUNNY
yes just like a cat to rub it in when they know you can't do anything about it! good luck in the comtest it was way too funny , i'm still laughing
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Never cross a cat, for he/she...will get you back...
Your poem is soooo true!!!! love this...
lapoe.
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oh my this is amazing lol what a chuckle i had over this..ive never for the life of me thought about writing a poem as myself as a animal and i'll tell you what you my love have worked a miracle its amazing laura xxx
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